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Breathless (Bleach, Ichigo/Renji/Rukia, R)

Title: Breathless
Author: aviss
Pairing: Ichigo/Renji/Rukia
Rating: R
Prompt: love/hate, double penetration; kissing over her head/"Uh, Rukia, you're still breathing, right?"


Some days she hates them so much she can hardly breathe when she's with them.

She hates that they can't touch each other when she's not acting as a bridge between them, she hates that they pretend to be just friends when she's not around, she hates that they don't notice the longing and need in the other's eyes unless she brings it up.

She hates that for them to be completed she has to be filled to the point of bursting, the pain drowning the pleasure, their need of each other so great they sometimes forget she also has needs.

Like the need for air.

Like now.

She's choking silently, trying to get too much needed oxygen inside her lungs; her skin is stretched so thin over her bones she fears its going to tear, both of them pressed against her--back and front; inside, deep, painfully crushing her lithe body between their bulk, their mouths a blurred mass of need sharing breath and spit over her head.

She fears they will forget one day she's there, try to push and claw their way to the other tearing her in the process until there is nothing left of her to share.

She knows it's stupid to think like that, but some days she can't help herself.

"Uh, Rukia, you're still breathing, right?" Renji's voice breaks her dark thoughts, the pressure easing and the pain receding. Air, blessed air filling her strained lungs again only to be stolen by Ichigo's mouth right out of her own the next second, his kiss as forceful and passionate as the one she saw him give Renji.

She lets him, opening to the kiss and shuddering in their embrace as Renji's mouth closes on the nape of her neck. She brings her arms around them, pressing Ichigo harder against her mouth and holding Renji firmly against her back, her body so hot she feels like burning from the inside.

They move then, slowly at first, gentle and careful as if she is something precious and breakable.

And she loves them; she loves them so much she doesn't mind disappearing between them; she doesn't mind being their bridge, their excuse, their anchor.

She loves them when they touch her and they fill her, when they kiss her and thrust inside her, she loves their moans and gasps and groans. She loves when they touch each other over her body, as if they can't help themselves. She loves how they kiss each other, trying to devour what they deny themselves outside this closed room, and she loves that they trust her enough to let her see it.

She loves them so much she can't help but hold her breath, even if it hurts, waiting for the moment they stop pretending.

She knows it will come, and soon. The moment when they are finally three instead of two plus two, and she also knows she will love them even more.

And it will hurt.

So she hides in her hatred, fake as it is, and waits.

Holding her breath.







( 14 comments — Leave a comment )
Jun. 1st, 2009 11:14 pm (UTC)
Wow, that was really good and the end just leaves you ver distraught. Great use of the prompt!!
Jun. 5th, 2009 02:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Jun. 1st, 2009 11:54 pm (UTC)


So, this was my prompt. Which I admit was slightly screwed up. But this is Bleach we're talking about. So, yay! I love this.

Plus, you managed both pyschology and porn, which is not to be underestimated. You also broke my heart just a little.

Which I thank you for.
Jun. 5th, 2009 02:43 pm (UTC)
Thanks! The prompt was a bit screwed up, but I loved it. I'm glad you liked the result :)
Jun. 2nd, 2009 05:06 am (UTC)
Fantastic! I really loved this. :>
Jun. 5th, 2009 02:44 pm (UTC)
Jun. 3rd, 2009 01:11 am (UTC)
Ahhh, this is lovely. The dynamics, especially, were really fascinating.
Jun. 5th, 2009 02:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Jun. 5th, 2009 09:00 am (UTC)
Oh ME HA ENCANTADO!! en serio ^o^ es que puedo imaginármelo así perfectamente y la pobre Rukia lo sabe y no le importa ser el nexo de unión para que Ichigo y Renji compartan lo que sienten entre ellos ♥ (pero bueno, también quieren a rukia así que está todo perfecto ^^)
"and she loves that they trust her enough to let her see it" me ha encantado, porque esto resume perfectamente la esencia de ese trío ^^ (y eso que no soy muy fan del Renji/Ichigo XD)
Oh GENIAL! *aplaude*
Jun. 5th, 2009 02:45 pm (UTC)
Muchas gracias guapa! Me alegro que te haya gustado, a mi la dinamica de estos tres juntos me fascina (motivo por el que siempre pillo los prompt suyos que veo) Y si, ambos quieren a Rukia (es canon) asi que la buena mujer tiene poco que temer XD
Jun. 8th, 2009 11:28 am (UTC)
Oh this was interesting, I liked it - I clicked just out of curiosity but I'm glad I did, it was an interesting little piece (with hot images *_*) and liked your description of how the situation made Rukia feel <3
Jun. 24th, 2009 07:04 am (UTC)
Jun. 21st, 2009 08:58 pm (UTC)
Um... WOW!

That really hurt, but at the same time it was so beautifully written. I have often thought that the three of them together are perfect for each other if only the boys would allow themselves to see it.

I loved how you showed the boys love and affection for Rukia in such simple terms and how they all really care for each other despite it only being from Rukia's point of view.

I think you did great justice to my OT3 in this story. Pardon me while I dance a jig because it's so rare to see anyone write this threesome. Thank you. ;)
Jun. 24th, 2009 07:05 am (UTC)
They really are perfect for each other, and it's the perfect solution to avoid love triangle drama :)

I'm glad you liked it!
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